From 46e6815abc904ce1d583ee62483eedfc8165bb57 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alice Gaudon <alice@gaudon.pro>
Date: Thu, 20 Aug 2020 11:58:29 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] More dialogue improvements

---
 dialogues/End_1.json     |  3 ++-
 dialogues/End_Lie.json   | 28 +++++++++++++++-------------
 dialogues/End_Truth.json |  1 -
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/dialogues/End_1.json b/dialogues/End_1.json
index d7261f3..d48a898 100644
--- a/dialogues/End_1.json
+++ b/dialogues/End_1.json
@@ -8,5 +8,6 @@
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "W-wait... Did you just say it was a recent oil tanker sinking?"},
     {"name": "Herbert", "text": "Hum... Yeah! It must have sank about a few days ago..."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "..."},
-    {"name": "Herbert", "text": "Are you okay?"}
+    {"name": "Herbert", "text": "Are you okay?"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "So... Yeah... Here's the thing:"}
 ]
diff --git a/dialogues/End_Lie.json b/dialogues/End_Lie.json
index b3c6937..5e542cb 100644
--- a/dialogues/End_Lie.json
+++ b/dialogues/End_Lie.json
@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 [
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "So... Yeah... Here's the thing"},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "I am a part of a non-profit organisation"},
-    {"name": "Crab", "text": "A what ?"},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "A bunch of people doing things more or less selflessly"},
-    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Oh, that's nice !"},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "Yeah, and our goal is to scan ocean in search of potential garbage and wrecks left by other hu-... uh... other [wave amp=20 freq=2]hoomans[wave/]"},
-    {"name": "Crab", "text": "How neat !"},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "We're mostly pals enjoying scuba diving together and collecting small funds for bigger organisations"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "I am a part of a non-profit organisation."},
+    {"name": "Crab", "text": "A what?"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "A bunch of people doing things more or less selflessly."},
+    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Oh, that's nice!"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "Yeah, and our goal is to scan the ocean to find potential garbage and wrecks left by other hu-... uh... other [wave amp=20 freq=2]hoomans[wave/]."},
+    {"name": "Crab", "text": "How neat!"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "We're mostly pals enjoying scuba diving together and collecting small funds for bigger organizations."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "And... you see, the oil tanker you found..."},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "We were supposed to go trough it and gather some pieces of information for later dismantelment"},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "We were supposed to go through it and gather some pieces of information for later dismantlement."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "But... as you can tell, it didn't go well."},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "The sea was thunderous, angry even..."},
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "And we lost our ship. I don't even know were my friends are..."},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "The sea was angry, thunderous even..."},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "And we lost our ship."},
+    {"name": "Ely", "text": "I don't even know were my friends are..."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "..."},
     {"name": "Crab", "text": "..."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "Crap..."},
@@ -21,7 +21,9 @@
     {"name": "Crab", "text": "..."},
     {"name": "Crab", "text": "That was a beautiful tale."},
     {"name": "Crab", "text": "In a sense, it brings me hope to know you're aware that oil tankers are bad."},
-    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Lie or not, yout story tells me somethings about hoomans and about you."},
+    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Lie or not, your story tells me something about hoomans and about you."},
     {"name": "Crab", "text": "Something good..."},
-    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Thank you..."}
+    {"animation": "fadeout", "timer": 4, "auto": true},
+    {"timer": 2, "auto": true},
+    {"name": "Crab", "text": "Thank you.", "expression": "black"}
 ]
diff --git a/dialogues/End_Truth.json b/dialogues/End_Truth.json
index e99e188..e77b409 100644
--- a/dialogues/End_Truth.json
+++ b/dialogues/End_Truth.json
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 [
-    {"name": "Ely", "text": "So... Yeah... Here's the thing:"},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "... You see, the oil tanker?"},
     {"name": "Herbert", "text": "Yes."},
     {"name": "Ely", "text": "I worked there."},